Evil Editor does dialogue

So Evil Editor is critiquing dialogue this weekend and on a whim, I decided to send him a clip. It's out of the "barfight" scene between Doug and Alec that I posted as my March X on Compuserve. I think it's pretty good dialogue, and the two commenters on my X have enjoyed it, so I guess we'll see what he has to say.

In the meantime, I really should go comment on everyone else's March Xs. I have meant to, I promise, but haven't found the time. Hopefully tomorrow.