Friday, August 31, 2007

Face-Lift 452

The query is up on Evil Editor as "Face-Lift 452".

See it HERE.

Not the glowing response I so naively dreamed of, *w* but he raises valid points.  Some of the stuff I cut out, he asks about.  Go figure.

I'll see what the Minions say, let it simmer, and have another go.  I've got time yet before I actually submit.


Carol A. Spradling said...

Hi Jenny,

Overall, not a bad review. The biggest thing I look for in comments like this is, how's my writing? You can fix anything else, but if you can't tell a story, you're sunk.

He did say your writing is good, and he also told you what to work on. Sounds good to me.

Jenny said...

Carol -

I know! When he endorsed my writing (implicitly) by saying it "wasn't a problem" that actually made me very happy. These guys are picky. And by the sheer number and detail of questions asked, I think I've managed to intrigue them rather than just being written off and ignored. So there's that, too.

All helpful comments, and there have been a few postive ones now that are very encouraging.